大家好，我是小石头。雅思考试的作文考验了大家的写作能力、逻辑能力还有组织结构能力，非常重要。小石头内部也有一个线上群，大家写好作文之后直接发在群里，可以让老师进行批改。今天为大家整理了同学们在写作过程中易错句子，快来看看大兵老师是怎么批改的吧。
学生：The past several decades have witness the galloping development of society.
大兵：Have witness 改成have witnessed.
学生：Another benefit is putting more money in it can offer more job opportunities.
大兵：改成is that putting.
学生：Apart from that, there were two accommodation circles stood at both sides of the reception.
大兵：circles which stood.
学生：It is also necessary to study a foreign language to work abroad.
大兵：For 表目的，后面加ing.
怎么样，你学到了吗？